Thursday, August 20, 2009

The Pursuit Of Happiness -The Eclipse .


Total Solar Eclipse of 22 July 2009

Total Solar Eclipse of 22 July 2009

5:20 AM .I was at the Regional Science Centre, Bhopal and no prize for guessing that I found her. Clad in a black &white striped top, blue jeans and a black jacket with hairs fluttering in the air and those cute little earrings; I couldn’t help but be mesmerized at the sight so much that I did not notice when she ended up her conversation with the professor and was standing before me awaiting an answer.

Was it you whom I saw yesterday? Do you live in the city? What brings you here? Are you with expecting someone? Whom are the flowers for?

Oh! I thought females had a bad memory recognizing men but it seems I have been wrong all those years. I don’t know about you, but I definitely saw you yesterday. Moreover, I don’t live in the city, I just came for the eclipse .I am not expecting anybody now and these flowers are for someone I like so you can have these flowers if you like happen to like them. I guess I answered all your questions. Now I suppose you wouldn’t mind answering mine.

You definitely are not from this city. So what brings you here? What do you do for a living and if you have an uncle in the city, why isn’t he around?

Yeah. I am not from the city .I came here for a short vacation .I am a Criminal Psychology student and it’s I who am interested in the eclipse, so I came all by me. By any chance, are you stalking me?

Don’t worry, a wise woman once told me that you shouldn’t desire what you don’t deserve although you can admire them .And I being insanely perfect for anyone to deserve, totally defines me being single. So there isn’t a chance of stalking you as I prefer being a bachelor than a master (or you can call it as slave).

So given the weather, how do you suppose you would see the eclipse?

I guess I am not that lucky today .Maybe next time. What about you?

I don’t give up that easily .I believe I would see what I came for. So if you really want to see the eclipse then you can come with me lest you have no problem trusting people at least one’s like me. So are you coming or not ?

Where do you suppose to see the eclipse and if you insist then I can come. Let’s see if your faith can at least move clouds if not mountains.

Clouds won’t be everywhere, so we can drive along the central eclipse path .Sanchi and Vidisha happens to be in it. Sanchi is an isolated divine hill some 50 kilometers away and as far as I have known hills, they don’t disappoint anyone. If it does and we still have enough time, we can go up to Vidisha. Even if your bad luck over rides mine, it would be a good morning drive and you can enjoy the caves there. So if that sounds ok then we can go get a ride.

Lucky enough I did not have to call the autowala from yesterday as she had a car, which she drove fast. It was about 45-50 kilometers away and I feared that the journey would end rather soon.

We talked little as she drove because she concentrated on the roads and I lost myself in the clouds somewhere.

Sometimes later, she broke the silence. What is that thing in your hand? Ah, it’s an equipment I was taught at school to know how much solar eclipse we have missed.

Just then, I noticed a little toy tiger on the dashboard and asked if it were her’s. She replied that it was her beloved tigress toy, which someone has made for her.

We luckily found a very beautiful place amongst the woods, which had a clear sky. We had missed quite a lot of the eclipse but totality was still a few minutes away.

Aren’t you scared of this lonely place or me? No, I like them both. What are your opinions on flattery? Does it work on you? Not until you tell me something that, I don’t know and you haven’t said before. So would you be flattered if I say that you look more beautiful than the eclipse. I know that for sure. People can miss the sight of the sun but not me .Look at you, aren’t you looking less at the eclipse and more at me?

Ok then let me think for a moment .The totality had just begun and I just a couple of minutes were left before the most spectacular sight of the century.

Have I ever told you that I am in love with you? I guess not so let me now. I held out the flowers and started pouring out words from my heart.

Ever since I first met you, I felt something missing in me. It did not take me much time to know what was missing because instead of my heartbeat it was always your name .There wasn’t a single instance when my eyes did not perceive you in everything it saw. All the bits in my memory have your image and a question as how to find you ever since the day we first met. All my wishes and prayers have been to see you again and tell you how I felt because without it my spirits wouldn’t rest in peace. I have been searching for you these entire days and you have no idea how I finally found you.

I could only get you flowers from the city, as I couldn’t find a ring better than the one in the sky, as I do not have friends or family in the city so I sent invitations to Mercury, Venus, Mars (from our solar system) and Procyon, Sirius and Rigel (stars) to witness the moment .I couldn’t find a better place than Sanchi, so I brought you here.

You just have 30 seconds to wear the ring or else it will be gone forever and so would the honorable dignitaries I have summoned. I lifted her hand towards the sky and the ring did seem to fit best into her lovely fingers.

She kept staring at the ring and those heavenly bodies until they bid adieu as the moon parted ways with the sun.

She looked stunned for some time. That was flattering, you are good at it aren’t you. So what favor do you expect in return?

Now that I have succeeded in flattering you, .You must show me around, as I leave not before night.

Do not take my words seriously .They were just meant to make this eclipse memorable .We came all this way long and so I just wanted to make it a point for you to laugh at with your friends. The eclipse would be boring to them but not this story if you tell them.

Life seems to be a joke for you right. Why does life have all the pleasure laughing at us .Sometimes we should laugh back too, isn’t it.

We stayed in the woods for a while and then got back to the wheels. We visited a few caves ,rode back to the city had lunch ,got on a steamer boat ,caught a movie in the evening ( Harry Potter And The Half Blood Prince – I haven’t seen any of its earlier episodes ,but who was interested in the movie anyways ).

Then finally, I was at the station not sure, if I should stay one more day. I decided to leave as there is always a next time. However, then something stopped me from boarding the train and I returned to where she was standing.

I opened my bag and I held out a tiger for her .My tiger refuses to go with me .He says he is in love with your tigress .Can you keep him along with her.

That’s it .That’s why you came back .I thought you wanted my number or something.

It’s very less likely that you would like to see me again and if you gave your number, that would be correct. Moreover, when I desperately need to see you again I will find you as I found you this time. Let me see if you remember me then. Thanks for the wonderful day. I wouldn’t forget anything about it.

Then my train left . . . . . . . with her waving at me .

7 comments:

  1. hmm

    Not exactly sad, not very happy either - the ending I'm talking about.
    We'll you should stop blogging and start writing short stories which will end up being longer than you thought they would, so make a Novel out of it.
    Blogging is not your place. I mean it. hehe
    Another point to be made, the girl seemed to be awfully stupefied after the major event, you didn't give much description as to how she reacted. Anyways, hope you concentrate on that part the next time :)

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  2. The post already has more than 1300 words so thought to leave the unsaid to the audiences imagination .Its only you guys who complain about it being long .I already had cut about 700 words off it .
    And this was the last of the series .No such posts until I see her again .

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  3. hmmm...well the ending looked like u wer in a hurry..(to catch a train:P)...doesn't match d standards of ur earlier posts...
    anyways... good job man...
    fly higher n higher...good luck..

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  4. @Anonymous :- Rejection is a fatal blow which few can take .Its better to live in hope of a probable relationship that could have existed than to be sure it never could have .That's why the end is abrupt .

    @ Nithin :- This I wrote from my perspective.Had I written from a third person's perspective ,I would have elaborated all the reactions.But then it would have been awfully long for people to read.

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  5. Right now I am in TCS office...and enjoying ur blog..and already have two more people near me who are reading it.for last couple of months.i had ended an interest in reading....ur blog has stipulated it again...."Simply awesome dude.." and I mean these words while I say...This story of yours had been even better than Paulo Coelho's many stories. (mind it i ve read 5 Paulo Coelho's)

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  6. I liked these lines esp ..that doesn't mean the rest were any lesser.

    here u r superb dud to explain hw a lover feels.You ve brought love at first scene into picture.
    "I couldn’t help but be mesmerized at the sight so much that I did not notice when she ended up her conversation with the professor and was standing before me awaiting an answer"

    Very naive but to the point question... heheh
    "and if you have an uncle in the city, why isn’t he around?"

    How motivating and supporting...its perfectly paulo coelho style
    "Where do you suppose to see the eclipse and if you insist then I can come. Let’s see if your faith can at least move clouds if not mountains."

    You ll always be "Wake up SID" dude..
    "We talked little as she drove because she concentrated on the roads and I lost myself in the clouds somewhere."

    Great sense,and hw romantic and laconic-aly romantic.
    "Aren’t you scared of this lonely place or me? No, I like them both."

    Perfectly romantic dude
    "I could only get you flowers from the city, as I couldn’t find a ring better than the one in the sky"

    Funny and rhetoric at ur childishness "That’s it .That’s why you came back .I thought you wanted my number or something."

    I think the best way to end . Its gudthat u ve left smthing to imagine on reader part also..Well its real painful end
    "Then my train left . . . . . . . with her waving at me.."

    Pls do not mind mine too much commenting at ur blog..Simply I wanted to express Hw gud I felt reading it..

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  7. Wow !!!1 Just when I had lost interest in writing . . . . Its does good to you being appreciated . And dude its not a painful story . . . Its not an end until all's well remember .

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